I actually liked it was fun to read and commet on, but if I had to pick one thing I would say that just try and get a little bit more voice in it.
I disagree, I thought that your voice was great! There are really not many things to improve on. I thought yours was great!
I actually liked it was fun to read and commet on, but if I had to pick one thing I would say that just try and get a little bit more voice in it.
ReplyDeleteI disagree, I thought that your voice was great! There are really not many things to improve on. I thought yours was great!
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